Black Poetry : BE's Blues

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...Hanging around, nothing to do but frown. Rainy days and Monday always get me down."
    ~K. Carpenter~

    In between your breasts
    My head needs to lay
    "What's wrong baby?"
    I need to hear you say

    I'll have no answer
    In one of those man moods
    Half cute
    Half sad
    I come to you
    My life
    My joy
    I'm pitiful and whinney
    Just like a little boy

    I need to drink of you
    Feel your kindness and softness
    Just need to hold you
    Without one word
    Be at peace with our oneness

    Today my heart is empty
    Come my love
    Please
    Fill it up
    Let love pour
    From your womanly cup

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blues for a Monday Afternoon....

    I hear the melody.....
    there's a low-down "NAWlins" feel
    the whine of a muted trumpet
    sexy soprano sax squeal....

    lawd knows ain't nothin like
    a tender man in need
    and the willing, waiting ____
    where he can sho'ly feed....

    I can hear the blues you singin
    so smooth and clear
    just as if you sang it softly
    all up in my ear....


    very nice, BE

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u 2

    blue MONDAY!:( :eek:
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and lucky is the man

    who can lay his head between the breasts of his woman and feel her love wash over him until his heart and soul have been replenished with her love and her words of comfort...

    you paint a tender scene with these words BE...

    K
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loved the flow...

    of a man in touch with his needs...and knows where/how to have those needs fulfilled.

    Ms A...your response was the exact response needed.

    LET THE RIVER FLOW.
     
  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Been There!

    Sure enough know this one--You hit me right about the shoulder because I think I was just there the other day--a nice flow for B's Blues--Ra
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you know

    at least every day isn't blue

    well written

    lovedided it

    ><DSSNY<>
     
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