Black Poetry : Bermuda Confused Me

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Confusion
    Mind set on different illusions
    Who was that that was with me last night...as I slept
    Eyes focused mind foggy heart moist with tears as I wept
    Feel lost and in a strange place
    Though this can't be dificult I've been here before only with a different face
    Why does this happen everytime I find what is called mine
    I mess it up
    Well not me my heart makes things tough
    You said to me so sweetly that you loved me
    Would do all you could to please me
    Nurture me like a mother's first born
    But for some reason I feel torn....
    !BETWEEN!
    Two forces both reality no dream.
    So real to me you are tell me what's on your mind how we vibe
    But why can't it just be one of you that gets me started
    I would choose,but,but,but it's so hard and....
    I dunno what to do if one parted.
    I'm lost in this galaxy everything seems wrong
    I try to stop it,but it prolongs
    To be with me forever in my thoughts trapping me my body mind and soul spirit and all
    My ears pound and throb like a filled hall
    Man my mistake so thoughtless don't know what's going to happen
    But I know I still have a friend
    Thought typing it would be easier but it makes it worse because I still don't get a **** thing I'm sayin
    Last night I thank for you while prayin'
    Yet in my mind a song about us kept playin
    I'm scared of the love you promise and how much you promised what you said how you said it when you said it......
    Uuugh I know I'll never forget it.
    I don't wanna hurt you no
    like Latif said so here I go
    Baby I'm not sure I love you can you understand that?
    So crazy this is what I'm feelin how I'm dealin and it struck like a bat.
    Still ain't told you got you dreamin' of me how it would be if we....
    Explored the powers of US:U+Me
    I must sigh and let this feelin out
    I think it's just me ya know my doubt
    That maybe this won't last
    Because of a blast from the past
    Yet there is another reason I'm divided baby got someone else drivin me crazy
    **** can't believe I told you that,but we gotta keep it real
    Now tell me how you feel
    Does it hurt because my heart is bleeding
    Someone please show me tell me how can this be cuz I keep seeing it as I'm sleeping
    Get the thoughts out go away pleeeeeease
    Please
    The struggle is too heavy I'm so deep
    In this Triangle"Bermuda"got me tangled.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all bottled up this was tyteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    That feeling of being torn, this was well put, let it flow.
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich,and watz you always have something to say I luv yaw :jumping: :jumping:
    THANX
     
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    very good script, feelign it!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx a million bucks:lol:
     
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