Black Poetry : Beneath the Wingz of the Windz……

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue seas…over looking
    The mountian..as the wind blows….
    It came without a name…
    No complaining….not even a bit
    Of shame……..proclaim and take within
    As it unfolds…..and lays…
    Willing to stay…..
    Just a sweet melody flow
    Never a step behind……but carries
    Beneath the wingz of the windz……
    For it open the door…….
    Maybe it appears to go un-notice…
    But it flows thru the
    heaven as it rides the windz.
    Soft petals float as
    It goes……
    In eyez…a tear falls
    Of joy…..white wingz float
    The air as it carries
    Beneath the wingz of the windz.……
    Embracing the warmth and its soothing
    Essences of joy held in….as it floats
    Look at it go…as it goes un-notice
    Upon the wingz of love…..

    a blkangel thang.......... :angel1:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome scribing
    indeed it's un- notice yet seen
    blowing floating care free in da wind
    tyte drop
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, I love this! what a beautiful flow
     
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    Really like it when you scribe in this style, flyin round like angels do, very serene.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$..indeed it do so many times
    goes un-notice....thanks for your words...
    love and all the support.... :angel1:

    awwwwww gempis..thank you your support have been wonderful
    the love given as well thank you.... :angel1:

    watzinaname..well i dont know if angels do it..
    but thankz for the support and love on this.. :angel1:

    Peace and Love yall
    Angel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you cant go un-noticed :) youre an angel :D
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater and triniti424..
    thankz for replin and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    As always sister..."Beautiful"
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelicsage..thank you my sister...
    much love and peace to ya
    Angel
     
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