Black Poetry : Beneath My Skin

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  1. D-Rock

    D-Rock Member MEMBER

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    I am wondering what it would be like to touch you for the first time;

    Embrace you tight and make you mine;

    I feel you on my fingertips;

    I can taste you on my lips;

    Swept under by your sweet caress;

    I'm falling for you, I confess;

    Because you take me deeper than I have ever been;

    To the core, far beneath my skin;

    Everynight, I fantasize;

    About being between your thighs;

    Kissing you soft, tasting your wine;

    Explode together, as our bodies entwine;

    You move a little lower;

    My world starts spinning slower;

    Your whispering moans, slowly, softly linger;

    I trace your face with my fingers;

    Yes, baby. You take me deeper than I have ever been;

    To my core, far beneath my skin;

    I kiss every inch;

    And explore you from head to toe;

    Rock you slow, until your body explodes;

    From the inside out;

    Show what rising passion is all about;

    A connection as if, we've been lovers for years;

    An ecstacy, so great, it bring us to tears;

    Burning my desire unto you;

    Bathe you with love is all I wanna do;

    Because you take me deeper than I have ever been;

    To my core, far beneath my skin;

    Open your thighs;

    Feel this firey passion, growing inside;

    Like fine wine;

    It will only get better with time;

    Let the world dissolve around our love;

    A God given gift, from heaven up above;

    Lay your naked body upon me, as we drift off to dream;

    Quiet and gentle like a soft moving stream;

    Don't ponder whether, my intentions are true;

    As I kiss your forehead and whisper, 'baby I love you.'

    You take me deeper than I have ever been;

    To my very core, and far, far beneath my skin.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man she one sweet gem to have and hold ........get ya groove on , I enjoyed this one
    got my pen jumpin to pen down a piece
     
  3. D-Rock

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    $$Rich$$ Yes sir...Can't wait to read what you got in the works homie..
     
  4. cherryblossom

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    Whoodie-Hoo!



    *Is it warm in here or is it just me?!* :?: lol



    This was romantic, sensuous and steamy! :toast:
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D-Rock:
    I am really feeln' your pen.


    "Because you take me deeper than I have ever been;
    To the core, far beneath my skin"


    This sound like some where I want to go and stay.
    I haven't drop a joint here in a while but this sure
    has my poetic wheels turnin' and churn' a bit,

    Luved it....Luved it...


    Much Luv,

    :heart:EVER
     
  6. D-Rock

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    CherryBlossom It's only as hot as you making it...I love your acknowledgement

    4EVERLUV I believe it is every poet's dream to not only touch, but to inspire...so if my mind connected to your's, creatively...than I consider that, one of the most remarkable of comments. Thank you...stay blessed.
     
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