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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Wisdom7, Aug 25, 2005.

  1. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Restless mind
    Broken vow
    Tell me beloved
    Who's harmed u now

    Your echoing cries
    Unlock my dorr
    You're hurting I see
    Please tell me more

    I've watched u stride
    With the grace of a swan
    Now stiff and careful
    Please do.. go on

    Where's the smile
    Of a rich man's prize
    Why closed lids
    On sparkling eyes

    A fool you are not
    Nor were u born
    You have lost nothing
    Yet u still mourn

    A voice of comfort
    A love song I'll sing
    I will hold u
    My Nubian king

    Surrender beloved
    Then you'll find
    The woman of you're dreams
    Is not far behind
     
  2. Alkebulan

    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a soothing & thot provoking ode 2 luv :love:

    nicely done.

    thanks
     
  3. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Alkebulan, it was pushed to the bottom so I didn't think I'd get a read. I'm glad u liked it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The chase is over, when you simply surrender to love. I enjoyed this scribe poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    given in to what holds da heart .......love that is
    very nicely done and said
     
  6. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Watsinaname and $Rich$!
    Love is a powerful thing :hearts1:
     
  7. Earftones

    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely done
    Peace
     
  8. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww

    wisdom7 sister this was beautifull :love:
    Welcome :wave: to destee,s place..


    the compfort the love and concern in this is beautifull









    mmm warm hug to you sister :love:
    and compfort:heart:





    (and beautifull you are joining in for the fasting youre an angel :smile:)





    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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