Black Poetry : BeLoved Nighten Gal

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Night has falling, and your image appears before me deeply

    all voluptuous and in gleam , I fancy , I see thee in thou stance
    passionately you penetrates my soul , My dream became your
    address where my heart looms in a web as it expands in da night
    you leave me with a gentle melancholy impression of you that's
    tapping at my very exsistance, each day brings me closer and deeper.

    The ardour of your glances set sail and this harp of melodies sings
    I hear thee like an hummingbird , as your buttery bronze take aglow
    with astonishment beauty. I reach to hold in grasp your very soul
    feeling da fervour of your desires watching your mental take flyte
    into a world of knowledge , I stand abound awaiting to share in it
    my spirit send it's breeze so that thee may feel me tenderly.

    Embracing your thoughts has made me smile as i watch da icy moon
    dance cross the lines of da sky , we venture inside love's door
    I could tell everything upon arrival as i bathe in da depth of your
    innocent, you at that point became my beloved nighten gal
    I so loveth thee overwheleming passionately , submissively and i
    incoherently is devastatingly exorbitant , in your angel eyez i have
    captured unknow joys, I am rich in pleasures .

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    $$RICH$$:
    Dang....I luv it when you write
    like this.....it is ever so BEAUTIFUL.



    Much Luv
     
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    Thank you sister 4EVERLUV i was looking cross the skies tonight and felt something
    as it weight in on my mind .....again thankz
     
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    oh my goodness, this beauty was insane! I dont know which was my favorite part. The visual imagery was spectactular, as you showed much loving insight to the tender object of your affection. Realizing where she has been, and seeing the moon shift slightly, unveiling a tru painting of self.

    My favorite part was "Watching your Mental take flyte" and "My Beloveth Nightingale I so love thee passionatly, submissly, incoherently, is devastatingly exorborant, in your angel eyes i capture unknown joys, i am rich in pleasures"


    :spinstar: So beautiful!!!
     
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    Thank you sweet apple*pie....happy you enjoyed this for it was well felt within me
    as i was looking outward i saw inward the grace of her image she talked to me tonight
    from the glance of the moon i saw her in flyte mentally
     
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    Most welcome, for a tru :spinstar: romantic man is a wonderful thing to witness.
     
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    yes indeed .....it was like purity before my eyez
     
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    Seeing a vision like this is quite something to behold, feeling it as well, can't be denied nor forgotten. Beautiful write.
     
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    Thankz sister watz .....u always read me so well ...
     
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    Do your thing $Rich$....do your thing!

    You do it so well.....!


    epiphany:heart:
     
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