Black Poetry : Believe in Me............

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I had a talk with you
    Cant believe the bullsh*t I've been through

    Earth use to shake when you came around
    Walking on a cloud I was, was known around town

    Now I realize
    My dream died

    House with a picket fence
    2 car garage all seemed dense

    As I feel reality slowing slipping away
    Scrounging around to see used tissue from the other day
    But still I pray

    That when darkness come let there be light
    I've given up like Mike Tyson can no longer fight
    But must bite

    My tongue
    As the feeling sensations go numb
    Am I dumb

    Because I'm blinded possibly been poison
    Can no longer hear melodious sound but straight noises

    As I hear lonely footsteps
    into the night as I wept

    I dream of a wonderful life
    [email protected] why am I pushing to become your wife

    When you don't see me as your shining star
    Why am I motivated trying to get far

    Through the next ordeal
    When I feel

    When hope seems to drift away
    Me being the fool for love continue to pray

    That he'll one day stand behind me
    And in due time all will see
    That you truly

    Believe in Me!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    If he continue to turn away
    come to me i'll stay
    show u i believe in thee
    caress u in worth u see
    picket fence and all it shall be
    just to show i believe in thee
    and how sweet it could be
    to be the wife of me
    if he don't know or show some clue
    then up da road is where i be
    awaiting ya love for u & me

    I Believe !!!!!!
     
  3. cursed heart

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    You cannot give love to hate
    You cannot bury a giving heart in a hollow ground of fate
    No love lines or gangster rhymes could comprehend your pain
    but as spirits chose you'll be the one holding the master key to souls
    Unlocking visions,revealing secrets
    speaking upon your journey
    though in amazement and shame
    his name is still written upon your eyes
    so cry,
    Erase the memories in you
    undress the naked lie
    to reveal the well dressed truth!

    Lovely poet, just lovely girl!:kiss1:
     
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    NICE WORK
    KEEP YA HEAD UP
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to my valentine rich....

    how can i turn away the stings he leaves is felt
    the scent of him just makes me melt
    when he unforgiveable he leaves a noticeable welt

    how can i walk away
    when he's my drug needed from day to day

    how could i ever love you
    are you saying those words could it be the truth

    all i want is someone to love
    to not argue or shove

    but someone who i could call all mine
    and who has the time

    to see us first
    instead of me burying our dreams in the dirt
    but still it hurts

    but i know deep down your right
    oh how i wish you were here Rich take flyte

    so i can just feel if only for one moment how it truly feels
    to have something thats mine and real

    to hear you say gurl cry no more
    i'm your angelz of love i'm here to even the score
    but still the tears pour

    cant decide
    wont let it ryde

    I just need for someone to

    Believe in Me!
    !!!
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to cursed heart

    girl how can i let go
    he's all i know

    he's my opposite
    i'm his opposite

    somehow through it all, all was well
    after two years of him all is not swell

    he hold me like he should
    we promise to love one another for good

    always there when he needs me
    when i need no where to be found
    i know this is bad you see

    but he has other quality
    got love that will knock ya to your knees

    how can i seperate lust from love
    its tarnished and cant be personified as two white doves

    your right cant turn love to hate
    why is it so hard to turn away from the loaded plate
    still fate

    hopefully will play on my side
    and with him i'll shall never let him ryde (me)
    Cursed heart i must confide

    the man runs deep into my soul and veins
    puts up with my tantrums and my complaints
    his prescence alone has this southern gurl about to faint

    because he just so full of mystery
    but then again all i want is for him to

    Believe in me!!
    !!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    That was deep sister
    I love the other side of your poem
    That real side for real
    Nice drop sister Nevar
     
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    Boy oh boy.
    I see beautiful work here
     
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    wow...well written...
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to tantrum...

    thanks for the love:kiss1:
     
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