Black Poetry : Belief Sequence

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i believe in fairy tales
    i believe in heaven
    i believe that 3+3 just don't
    equal seven

    in America there are
    exceptions to each and
    every rule

    but i'm tired of it just plain
    fed up in dealing with these
    fools

    in public schools children use and abuse
    drugs and secret weapons for their
    protection

    instead of arming themselves
    with intellect for the sake of each and every
    endangered mind that's faced with neglection

    like pure deception
    the development of a nation embroidered in lies
    i sympathize with those who despise when the
    University of Alabama says "ROLL TIDE"

    we struggle with the epitome of our soul
    when it dies we LOSE control like a bowl full
    of charcoal dumped in an open flame whose
    to blame

    we claim fairy tales don't exist
    but we believe in heaven

    continuing to lead our lives by exception
    when 3+3= 6 not seven and fairy tales only exist
    to those who TRULY believe in heaven







    lana1287 productions :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD

    Feelin ya ma... I believe in fairy tales

    Reas
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    thanx Reason

    never stop believing :)

    pd
     
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    i've alway had believed still do thank u for dis one to asure me...
     
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    thanx Richy Rich

    pd
     
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    ...the university of alabama line aside :lol:
    i was diggin' this one heah. you know what
    i think?? i think you should hook up your mic
    & let us HEAR this one read... it just flows
    like that. real-ly! thank you for sharin'...

    & i believe in fairy tales. (as old as i am!)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    this is awsome
    I really dug each line
     
  8. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    oops my bad GA i mean elayne

    i didn't realize UA was such a touchy subject :D

    it won't happen again

    you know what i'm trying to get the technical
    link down so i can deliver spoken word

    it's coming it's coming :lol:

    peace

    poeticd
     
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    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Shaz

    glad you felt it :)

    pd
     
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