Black Poetry : Being There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jun 20, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEING THERE

    Soar when fighting but poor writing
    take my strength away can’t be
    A Super hero if I’m a trooper with
    zero victories I wanna paint the sea
    With whale blood and prevail a thug
    in the form of a shark, storm with art
    And calm the dark like vampires from
    warm campfires in search of folks
    Stay ready to write need a steady light
    to shine on my notebook my quotes
    Look good now like Steven King I’m
    receiving bling for notes made about
    movies, my devastation can reach people
    that vacation on the beach stuff vital and
    brave like a tidal wave wash shores of nations
    Got a life code divine and sometime foolishness
    load my mind situations happens my stamina
    grows dim like a camera with overexposed film
    Can’t take pitures of the fake scriptures I hear,
    try stay above an enclosed rim Like TUPAC
    best to only read true art that’s the only way to
    get ahead Or step wild like a reptile get ate by
    the jungle, really hate to rumble misled many
    suspicious mammals and vicious animal in society
    I best stop on red like traffic do and get a graphic
    view before the head on collision with problems
    Dawg, got a serious code and plans solid like a load
    of sand highway brick involve them Too this could
    build an ill road of guilt, be a thrill to explode the filth
    within my head by using dynamite then I can drink wine
    at night and relax and grin // Sleep under bold linen and
    few old women have laid in my bed Aad persuade my head
    to have complex sex afterward their kotex bled
    Ethical and prudent like a medical student work
    hard just to graduate if bad fate comes my way it
    could be a dumb day best not to exaggerate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop bruh !
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich for the props for real
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa i dont know where you were goin with this but i cant lie i was feelin it kid...on some def poetry styleee...hahaha...yea kill em with the flow bro...kill em with the flow
     
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    THANKS LURK FOR THE PROPS FOR REAL
     
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