Black Poetry : being the bastard...(this is just a poem!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Mar 26, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo, had to tell her today
    i don't want no **** babies
    she got the nerve to act surprised
    and cry!
    told her from the jump
    i just wanted to hit it
    she was like "okay"
    trying to be all sexy and stuff
    man please, save dat for them novels
    she gon tell me
    "i wanna feel it natural the way god made you"
    i'm like cool, i hate them condoms anyway
    you ain't said nuttin but a word
    so we do our thang
    you know
    put it down like that
    i can't even front
    babygirl was good to the last drop
    had a ***** thinking about getting it together
    yeah right!
    please, soon as its over i'm outta there
    she talking bout cuddling and stuff
    don't she know i'm the booty slayer
    number one player
    i just wanna freak you
    i ain't tryin to keep you
    she gon cry about how good it felt
    hell i know, so what?
    i gotta go
    now today i get home
    here she come callin
    i figure she need another tune up
    you know, some of that freaky freak
    she gone tell me she pregnant
    i'm like so?! what you want from me
    i told you girl i ain't taking care of no babies
    she gone cry on the phone
    didn't even have a clue
    soon as i got my nut
    i was through with you
    talking bout she done told her moma
    like whats that gonna do?
    i told that old trick the same
    i'm just doing my thang
    all i wanted was your daughters coochie
    so you better take her to fix it
    cause i ain't tryin to buy no wedding rings
    she gone hit me wit the church speech
    like i care
    she coulda spared that breath
    all she did was waste some air
    when that didn't work
    here come the rage
    forgot all them church words today
    told me to go to hell
    her daughter was better than me anyway
    i said yeah she was
    thats how she got her *** played
    her moma gon scream at me
    told me i was a no good bastard
    my response to what she said?
    yeah
    as a matter of fact, i'll be that...
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Dam!!

    This **** is too funny!!
    :lol:
     
  3. Vyolet

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    I like this poem even though theyre guys out there like that and hopefully ure not one of them but newayz this was good aight.

    HOLLA (i love doin that) :)
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U did good to say this was just
    a poem. I would hate to think u
    think this way. However, for entertainment
    purposes, it was hilarious. but for real
    there are men out there that feel this way,
    and it's not really that funny! Dug the flow
    my brotha. :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN U BUSTIN' MY SIDE

    U R SO WILD BRU....LOVE DIS TYPE OF ****!:lol: :lol: :lol:
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The content was a bit disturbing because you presented it so well dude. I got personal problems with cats not loving their seeds so when I read your joint is was very vivid and real -the same realness that brothers and sisters are living today -an ill moment indeed, but poetically, a righteous deed putting it out like that. Holla.
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this hear stirred up some anger, it's so real!
    thanks for stirrin up some fiyah!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have 2 daughters
    count em 2
    and this poem is something they sould read just in case they need a reality check.
    and that is what this poem sounds like to me a reality check!
    you did not say that this is how you feel!
    at least not all the time
    and you did not say that you endorsed these feelings or that they were wright
    you simply presented a perspective in poetec voice, and I have one that is very simular that I wrote as a warning to my daughters.
    diggin this flow thanks poet
     
  9. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have a 16yr old son and a 10 year old daughter, these thoughts are a warning to them as well as others. while the conversation is disturbing, it is also definitely real. parts were inspired by one of my son's former friends...and the madness continues

    god bless and do your homework,
    Derrick Jay
     
  10. Sista_Gurl

    Sista_Gurl Active Member MEMBER

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    man I think I went out with a dude like that hmmm
    it was just draining thanks
    Sista gurl
     
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