Black Poetry : Being Realistic

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being Realistic

    If you have sad lines need to add rhymes to your weight
    To hardcore escape whackness great practice could take
    You to higher levels in rap, alter my style hate to falter that’s
    Senile, drink water and smile need to protein to flow mean stats
    Stamina is dim load a camera with film take pictures of pastures
    My scriptures masters plowed grounds with loud nouns disasters
    Strike in form of sink holes when I think bold use ink on scrolls
    To express myself in the best health as this rap standpoint unfolds
    My stuff boss and critical even in the hospital make patients twist
    Brisk style disperses while nurses assist in childbirth and kiss
    A proper doctor, so rap is my baby this crap is crazy in pediatrics
    Officials has incubators to study this creator’s silly ability even Patrick
    Swayze wanna flash dance and get cash in advance for this movie
    In the auditorium from the streets now come up to speak smoothly
    About how corruption destroys production, like and accountant give
    Statements of money received so no dummy or sleazy buster can live
    And think it’s easy being hustler, best prevail straight or become
    Jail bait some paid the penalty and stayed mentally sick crime is scum
    Need a protector with a magic trick like Inspector Gadget slick some?
    And tell what has been done and then some is able to sip rum
     
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    You are like the Ever Ready bunny with those rhymes, rhymebad.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname thanks fo rthe props for real girl
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another well done drop in a lyrical maze
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich thanks for the props on this one for real homey
     
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    u got it brother , u know i had to hit u up on this one
     
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    yeah thanks for the props everyone
     
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