Black Poetry : Being Real

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being Real

    My script docking like ships stopping, flow an ocean
    In slow motion, wear slipper and share clipper in portions
    Of haircuts, with numbers I’m elevating keen like
    A calculating machine I count the amount of cash just green hype
    Look my affair is in despair like a lost child it cost wild
    During divorce see a course of destruction behind her false smile
    Married to her was like shifting gales not an uplifting female
    So on this very day she’s on her merry way to her door my key failed
    Like medicine try abate pain and educate the brain of cats
    Not afraid of MC’S like a barricade of trees block roads
    And drop loads of junk and funk in paths with hot codes
    Leave a whole nation in total frustration like bad economics
    Sad Ebonics is like backwoods slang act could be lame as chronic
    Fever, like a loud storm, clouds swarm with in my ill flow the rain
    Stopped but the wind still blow// can kill like bow and arrow in the game
    Of hunting, write tribulations then surrender like the height of civilization
    And splendor during the stone age my dome in rage like biblical revelations
    Cats wanna travel in social brackets I try unravel
    These local racket thugs move alone and babble
    To themselves groove strong on gravel like hummers
    During the summers, and like bookies play with numbers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pat pat pat !!!
    dis was phat
    u did it again wit power
     
  3. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH thanks for the props for real
     
  4. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another tyte one
    this was interestin
    keep the flow goin
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Prizefighter16 THANKS FOR TH EPROPS FOR REAL APPRECIATE THAT
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop...flow head on.... :great:
     
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    Nubian One Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice!!

    "to her door my key failed"

    wow... powerful piece..

    keep writing
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do yo thang poet...
    All eyes in madd admiration.... :welldone:
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ALL RIGHT THANKS FOR THE PROPS TO EVERYONE GOT TO KEEP DOING THIS FOR REAL
     
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    R-TRU Member MEMBER

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    Good grief!

    Maddrapper got madd skill! much love to ya man. Keep flowing and goin, always keepin it poppin and never be stoppin'! good scribe brotha.
     
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