Black Poetry : Being On It

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being On It

    Write distinguish English and draw raw on the fine commands
    Of grammar and plans for the glamour in words that stands
    As solid sick bricks for foundation, disappointed on the jazz
    I see as for me except for a cold I feel good and deal in the hood
    With crime, concerned about HIPHOP I’ve learned a lot of good
    Stuff, like grabbing a microphone and yelling and screaming
    Get plenty done and anyone can do work if its dreaming
    Too much whack junk touch schools and make such fools
    Of kids until homework become a thing of the past, duels
    With stupidity worsens the city is bursting into pieces today
    Compounding a felony clowning has become a melody lets pray
    True strangers are alerted to the dangers of inflation
    Annoint facts from point of contact in the nation
    I see gold that need to be sold on the stock market
    that’ll rock the carpet under high gas prices and target
    the grocery and poetry in Walmart and make a tall start
    in correcting the economy, I’man official beast with spark
    have an initial release in art, noteworthy with quotes curvy
    like Dairy Queen Ice Cream can’t lick this yall don’t worry
    stick it on your wall and hurry, do tons of write as a minority
    a member of the nonwhite majority end up a tree hung sorority
    so it’ssmart to hide from Aparthied, look I’min an affair lame
    must prepare fo a hurricane fell like a lost clown with no name
    getting toss around by plain winds my brains spin over this dame
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it does spin over!
    Love your complementations!
    Send me to the edge and I get scared can I go or get back to your caculations
    And become a correct number or will it keep sending me to solve my own complications
    That life spins on me Daily in Math class!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another great flow
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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