Black Poetry : Being Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, May 16, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being Me

    Bold and studded plus cold blooded like a penguin had
    To acclimated to artic conditions caught psychotic and sad
    Friction from cats, step free and like a refugee try build
    A home and use my ill dome to escape the cops and fill
    My destiny, try flow well and large like hotel accommodate cats
    And dominate with stats and some come with a strange holler like brats
    Wanting change for a dollar, eyes twinkle and skies wrinkle
    I Make It rain like Fat Joe, shoulder lean, bolder team sprinkle
    Flavor on dudes behavior attitudes are major problems in rap
    Abeing asked to a party blast everybody on the dance floor perhaps
    A chance to score and have sex, but kept my cool and ate the scraps
    No leftovers tonight, being a blank butt is like being bankrupt
    You owe money and cash start to flow funny can’t fill my tank up
    With gas very fast, have to pass by the filling station not a thrilling
    Situation, like a teacher accept flowers as a preacher step spilling
    Powers in a holy way, and boldly say the words of Christ, life
    Is a silent menace and like violinist it play music best use it nice
    To survive the strife at every corner and be a donor of good tidings
    Join clubs and like drugs calm thugs then rub my palms while riding
    Hoping for answers
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the twist of being whom you are ....yourself
    this was phat bruh !
     
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    "To survive the strife at every corner and be a donor of good tidings
    Join clubs and like drugs calm thugs then rub my palms while riding
    Hoping for answers"

    YES! Felt a deep vibe at the ending.

    Bother, you are the Solution.

    Bless up.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    Great wordplay here rhymebad.
     
  5. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo rthe props on this one for real almost let it slipped through without comment
     
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    if you keep asking the questions

    and you REALLY want the answers, they will come

    hang in there soldier

    just get into "self"

    all the answers are there

    peace man

    and most of all

    take it easy
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FO RTHE PROPS FOR REAL YALL
     
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    You RhymeBad but you SoundGood. This was phenomenal & and I'm sinking in yo deep! Right On Write On!!!
     
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    Yo this is sick pa...OMG
     
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