Black Poetry : Being Just

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being Just

    My pride is great that how I stay wide-awake with an
    Alert mind ready to insert rhymes into microphones for fans
    Swift to uplift hearts and shift my art to the dining room
    designing a spoon to scoop up flavor my group behavior is doom
    in the streets my attitude is unique and rude its one of caution
    expect to be attacked my head wrecked on crack had to auction
    some off, heard an air raid alarm now in this affair afraid and harmed
    must find shelter, now on guard as a wrong retard approach he warned
    me to prepare for action like hurricane victims worry about this lame system
    shook no doubt had to look out for guns hell got my hand on my glock
    like Black Rob it’s a whack job and they’re facts involved about drug stock
    people love the rock, now I see a beauty queen with booty lean, so keen
    and active seem so attractive, she walks swift and agile dress lift fragile scene
    between her thighs I can have fun down there she so unaware jest strut
    butt, I try be a writer and educator a fighter in the legislature of rap wearing a tux
    look I’m on a path of static dealing with life’s mathematics I’ve had it
    with numbers that don’t add up now I’m a mad butt so its just automatic
    I thug out, flow high as I notify with stats in advance plus want a fat chance
    To romance a girl have difficult questions the results is aggression in the stance
    Of a hug and kiss see major change in a behavior so strange, look boo let
    Me git wit you suck a *** or two? “RHYME boo you don’t know the wet
    Stuff I went through when my rent was due giving you some I’ll regret
    Better yet ready to make a clever bet that you have another girlfriend
    That’s how the world spin love words hit my ears like a whirl winds”
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to keep it just, doing what's right to the best of your ability, that's all you can do rhymebad.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Another nice drop.....keep moving in the upward direction to ya just reward ahead
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE RESPONSES ON THIS ONE i AIN'T DONE YET HA! HA!
     
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    cuz when ya headz turned/ they take away/ and make a play/ for the rest/ countin' on miseducation/ and bettin' your RIGHT NOW is your best/ fist full of dollars/ from cashed checks/ mental stacks on deck/ bein' only what YOU expect/ face today/ leave then/ live now/ and reach tomorrow being just!!!

    Always gotta keep it pushin' ALL WAYS!!! Dug this thoroughly!!!
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKSFOR THE LOVE ON THIS ONE FOR REAL YALL GOT A KEEP DOING ME
     
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    SEE...

    i was with you 'til you got to that "my head wrecked on crack" thang. but, hey...you just being you.

    flow dat.
     
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    THANKS FOR THE PROPS AND CRITIQUE ON THIS ONE
     
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