Black Poetry : Being In

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Feb 15, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being In

    A distinguish vet with the English alphabet flow bounce
    I pronounce words and verbs and its all heard every ounce
    Through a true microphone none of this is hidden it could
    Be a written or printed representation ands till be all good
    Even fast troops in a class or group could march to this
    During the fight with Katrina I was like a striped hyena
    Ran for higher ground rowing down a river like Ike and Tina
    I try peace but like a high priest end up praying and staying
    For more flood condition blood and crucifiction many slayings
    On my drop top have empowering rims resembling flowering
    Stems so I bloom with a tune in the CD yall know I’m towering
    Showering in cologne while cowering at home just can’t run
    The street without a gun or heat, this stuff is like a sail son
    It propel ships while I flow well in scripts best take a pleasure
    Cruise and enjoy the treasure of this smooth flow can’t measure
    This, got a yard that encloses chicken and livestock I’m deft MC
    And like KFC stuff finger licking at five oclock make me a VIP
    In the hood for good greasy lips, biscuits and be plum sick with
    A drumstick a crowd come quick to share some buffalo wings lift
    The hot sauce my plot is boss
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hot n' spicy mild and tasty keep droppin'em
     
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    Particularly enjoyed your rhyme scheme in this one rhymebad, and how line built upon the previous one.
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey yall thanks for the props on this have to keep on coming like this for real
     
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