Black Poetry : Being honest

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Being honest

    Biting off crap eating attending rap meeting they’re intended
    To clear the air I fear this affair will lead to contracts amended
    A phenomenon circus with no common purpose tried to skip out
    But my script and clout was voted best and promoted less routes
    Of violence no dout they silenced the critics and calm to rejects //
    Men offend when they disrespect have to twist their necks
    Cats gamble and handle a brisk deck or cards loaded to collect
    Cash as a smoker in poka, hot and sweaty but not ready to bet
    Yet on this hand, on the streets with love and grace a real threat
    To meet thugs face to face stay on pace to race for my life
    Must duck my head or get struck by lead this is nothing nice
    Roll dice and hold a knife drink mature wine and write pure rhyme
    No cure for my mind can’t afford a car wreck had to insure mine
    As a psycho went to Geico and rapped to a cave man he had
    A brave plan my friend for vehicles if you spend a few nickels mad
    In a jar tried to store flavors a bore to the neighbors during rap
    Rehearsals said I was all slop somebody called the cops they slap
    The handcuffs on me prevailed jailed no bail posted, I’m trapped
    My word stands like bird man of Alkatraz must escape this tower
    By using my great power, take a shower many tried and now cower
     
  2. Skybeauty

    Skybeauty Member MEMBER

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    I like it makes u think....has a lot of humor....
    "No cure for my mind can’t afford a car wreck had to insure mine
    As a psycho went to Geico and rapped to a cave man he had
    A brave plan my friend for vehicles if you spend a few nickels"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    had me thinking about back when keep droppin it hot
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm sure this sounds great spoken rhymebad, great rhythm to it.
     
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