Quiet Poetry Lounge : BEING CONSCIOUS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jun 10, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEING CONSCIOUS

    Stay hard when I play cards just to protect my deck it
    Reflect my winnings, throw aces and go places illegit
    Have to trot with a glock in my pock ready to shoot
    Holes in hats and bring bold stats as a gangsta absolute
    Like DENTZEL stuff went well until they tried to take
    My turf, at a bazaar pace I changed into SCARFACE make
    Way and welcome to my little friend in a car race to escape
    Cops, in court tonight I support light like the base of a lamp
    And chase the damp darkness being heartless legs all cramped
    This is a fat whack attack in hopes to wipe out the type of clout
    Getting props yet not rhyming proper, junk is hype no doubt
    This is a ballistic test with characteristic dressed rhymes
    The size of a grain of sand little but will fiddle with spines
    Have a strong mind not a long time to demonstrate got wines
    In the refrigerater not a big hater we can drink together divine
    Rhyme have life my mind grab strife verses remain alive
    Through the lame jive I hear and fear on the radio try strive
    To be better no matter the weather, treat whack cats bad
    On street attack with bats in clad over eat being fat is sad
    Life stay funny have to pay money to keep up with bills
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    thank you rhymebad

    this is on the money...

    I did like the way ur titles were always the first line of ur rhymes..

    that'z a cool signature for ya....

    propas due .. u puttin in wrk!

    "say goodnight to the bad guy" :lol:
     
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    Ahhhh definitely on it!
     
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    It pays to always be ready to act or react, cause some folks just waitin on you to sleep.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alwayz good to know when to do and not to do...very nicely done
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the props on this one for real yall
     
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