Black Poetry : BEING APPROVED

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Jan 23, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEING APPROVED

    My rhymes freezes the system and seizes victims like
    And abductor got a handsome ransome for wisdom and hype
    Thunder bounds from underground storage tanks and like
    Gasoline pumps come with fast clean junk when all of sudden
    My buttons are pushed, got academy awards like Timothy Hutton
    Theme bring satisfaction with a scheme of action my art scatter
    Darts while I mark data on charts like a plotter depart fatter
    With more knowledge ready to soar in college with chit chatter
    In a political mood with a critical attitude that’s all that matter
    Rhyme legit and wise but the blind wanna criticize and find fault
    Get my mind caught up in controversy have to eat Hershey in bulk
    To relax my act so I drop it like chocolate kisses, I’m lion mad dressed
    In ironclad got a group of flows but loopholes exist in this not impressed
    Make it a habit within my tablet to write notes corrupt chumps get
    Soaked up like water in towels stuff will slaughter bowels and leave wet
    Pieces of Feces in pants increases the chance for constipation, look
    Between battles teams get rattled like the armies of Grant and Lee
    In the Battle of Spotsylvania Courthouse, bitterness remain to be
    In a wilderness campaign to free all doubts, speaking of insects
    Had tons fumigated got fund accumulated get spray and protect
     
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    Astrologer4U Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @rhymebad :great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing bruh ! ya pen was spanking da page ...
     
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    Nice drop

    Flows keeping school open all night
    Be learning
    Take out a book
    Look up on information:read:
    When you tap into the room

    Like the battle in the drop
    Between Grant and Lee
    Slaughter the crowd with mad knowledge
    Like the union at the court house.

    Can appreciate
    The true craft
    Recognize real skill

    Time being shared
    No found fault
    So everything relaxed
    Communicate thru the facts
    Keeping it real

    Keep flowing rhyme
    In time
    Even the students will recognize
    The teacher was in
    :teach:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is one of those flows I'd really like to hear spoken, have you ever recorded any of your flows, rhymebad?
     
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