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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Fifteen notes three subsides
    adorable pieces of past
    be-founded in the sweet hush
    the wave of notions
    she bring a new days ahead
    oceans like trees branching off
    in a path making new beginnings.

    Tears like a river stream running
    aloof on days that spool a journey
    as another door open, where realism awaits
    on a bounded smile of joy, I hear my name
    a beckon call and sweet slumber
    I know not yet dreamth of wit eyes wide
    shhhhhh! hush!
    I hear my name.



    A Dyamondluv
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    Da $R 2014
     
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    You better answer tht calling Strong Black Man!
     
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    life's most treasured, breath-taking moments...resting in the pools of silent tears...gathering peacefully below a strong jaw line...softly dripping between the borders of a wide smile...and a contented heart.

    show your love, $$RICHMAN$$
     
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    Nice as always brutha $$$$Rich$$$$$

    Peace!
     
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    I know men don't like to hear this but (lol), that was sweet. Real sweet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz poetic family , it was that moment in the sweet hush I heard my name and felt something......
     
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    very nice felt a comfort of sort as when on door close another surely opens where joy and happens....but then it can have lots of meanings to different ppl but that's what I get....miss ya read ya around
     
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    And around I will be just look up above there I be afloat, thanks for the visit .
     
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