Quiet Poetry Lounge : BEHOLD THE DRUMMER

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  1. godsmantru

    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    By the seashore
    of the sitting Son
    there are thre sisters
    the three are one

    As snow in summer:
    Behold the DRUMMER his march is on!

    The Son from heaven:
    He paid the price
    O how precious his sacrifice!

    All things NEW, he prepared a place
    for all things pure
    shall behold his face.

    BEHOLD the the drummer:
    He marches on!

    Judgement spews from the time we sail;
    It was finished with one last NAIL.
     
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    enjoyed reading this piece poet.
     
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    Enjoyed the pace of this piece, such power in your words.
     
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    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you for your kind comments. Anytime we render Glory to God it shows both the Power and where it comes from.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome write i enjoy this to the fullest
     
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    Thanks rich, there is a LOT of Talent that flows thruogh this forum. Each individual has there own style and rhythm. I havent been at this long enough to really flow like others here. I try to read everyones contributions to see how they flow. I havent read a boring flow yet. While I would like to show some love to all here, I am just a novice as of yet. And wouldnt want to voice my opinion on an individual basis as of yet: but inspiration is definitly the norm in this place!
     
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    Yes indeed, listening to the drums
    The March goes on. A price was paid
    and now we know. Just how deep
    His love do flow.
    Very AWESOME write.
    Thank you
    Much Love!
     
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    godsmantru Banned MEMBER

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    Thanks Bluewater, although the Glory is all God's.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just do you and keep up the good work .....drop some love on other poet's
    as you read them .
     
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