Black Poetry : Behold a King...

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  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Regally posed, this piece was finely sculptured.
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

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    excellent write!!

    Its such a treat to read you.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    (Btw...Momma is so proud...she's looking for an agent for you... :D )


    Seriously...this was a "Regal" Work of Art...
    and it echoes volumes about the character of
    the author.../ her wisdom, creativity & vision...
    the mixed melody...herself...

    All Praise to Queen Triniti... :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    That King...didn't know the blessing
    that would present herself that day... :wink:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very super and well done
    outstanding scribe sistah
     
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    Classic elegance, my lady
    My Queen.
     
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    masterpiece....
    you done out did
    yourself once again
    just flow gurl
    this was laid sweet
    mold perfect
     
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    Girl, this was just off the chain, the visuals and the way you expressed the way you felt when you saw this man was just wonderful. I was really feeling it and couldn't stop reading. Much love to you!
     
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    this is deeply lovely sistah Trini
    wonderful
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    wow girl!!! you are seriously up there on my gotta read list!!!! this was soo tight and made me actually feel like i was in the presense
     
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