Black Poetry : Behined Bars

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  1. SupaUgly

    SupaUgly Member MEMBER

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    Behind Bars

    I never knew how much I appreciated freedom

    Until it was taken me
    The crimes I've committed has brought me to a place that I rather not be

    A day is nothing more then a day as I sit here rotting in this cell

    Wishing someone would take me out of this world because this is worse then

    hell

    As the years go by I soon realize that freedom is nothing more then a distant

    memory of the past

    Perhaps I'll be able to find the piece within myself I have been searching for

    at last

    As the end draws near and it gets closer to my etneral sleep

    I ask the lord before I'm judged to look at the life that he's given me

    A neighborhood field with drugs, death , and poverty

    I wanted to do the right thing but was forced into a life of crime to support

    my family

    Now am I guilty or a victim of society

    A tragedy or a menace

    All I want is forgiveness

    Before my final sentence
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    leave it in the eyez of GOD
    prayer is the key ask him
    for thy forgiveness .........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we have to look at the whole picture before we cast judgement, but God will be the final judge. Deep drop.
     
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    calisugga17 New Member MEMBER

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    freedom is a state of mind, they can lock you up, but no one can shackle your brain, your heart, or your soul, be free through knowledge, be free through love, be free through your beliefs and pass that knowledge on to free someone else, you are obviously highly intelligent, and artistic, don't let anyone take your natural abilities away from you!!! And remember, the only forgiveness, understanding or judgment that means anything is from God, forgive yourself, and then ask for his forgiveness.
     
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