Black Poetry : behind ....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Mar 5, 2003.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it seemed i would never find.... constantly protecting the truth of how much i did mind .... that !!!!
    lost in a disarray of bright colors ... never, i could distinquish one from the other... building on the foundation that i would like to travel just a little further ....yet, broken wings carry u only thru gutters ......

    u look around only to find the distance gone... has wore u thin to the bone.... unexpectantly the place that u've arrived is the same "surprise" for here to ..... u play the same game... only this time they've just begun to know your name and u rest upon the fame.... of them not knowing how far behind ...

    so u reach some type of comfort there .... convience yourself it better than no---where

    thinking u got time
    still u fall behind
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely written
     
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    $rich$ stole the words right out of my mouth!! it really was nicely written/worded- "thinking u got time still u fall behind"
    Keep it up!
     
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    often we find ourself trying to keep up with some once else's pace ..... then find it hard to face ..... that this really is not your race ..... such a lonely place
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it is and very lonely when u out on the limb
    da path should be the one u set not the one made
     
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    tell the truth rich tell the truth .....
     
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