Black Poetry : Behind da clouds

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Phenessy, Jan 2, 2004.

  1. Phenessy

    Phenessy Member MEMBER

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    you were never meant
    to be put in between
    a war within
    two lovers
    out of control
    out of the arms
    of one another
    by misty weather
    twisting turning
    uprooting any hurt
    i rather it be
    in secrecy
    that i love you
    no where between
    can we meet
    as others try me
    i glide by
    flying high
    by the wings of you
    and i..those dreams
    of us giving love
    retrieving hugs
    thru ya orbs
    ya soul still beckons
    pumping clearly in
    my veins..as we reign
    behind the clouds
    let it rain
    let it rain
    for i reclaim
    my love
    is yours
    forever more
    for the one
    i adore..
    i love you
    may this touch
    ya in the place
    where love races
    :heart:

    Phenessy
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome agian...
    spicy flow
    i likes it....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done this was awesome flowing ya pen on fire flow on
     
  4. Phenessy

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    Thank you mzblkangel
    Thank you $Rich$
    I write from the heart..
    the only place
    i dwell in the arms
    of my pen!

    Phenessy
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a sweet romantic scribe...hope we hear more from you, and welcome!
     
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