Black Poetry : Begging A Woman is Wrong

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  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beggin a woman is wrong
    By Manasiac

    Begging a woman is wrong

    A Disclaimer before you read on
    This ODE is disrespectful and strong

    Now let's move on

    A lot of you weak men are the reason
    That this poem is in season

    You beg chicks for time
    Beg them over the phone
    Beg them in the form of rhymes

    LETS GET SOMETHING STRAIGHT

    If she aint calling you back
    She does not want to go out on a date
    She does not want your time
    Please stop burning up her line

    If you visit her and she acting funny
    She obviously do not want you or your money
    So remember this and move on

    Begging a Woman is Wrong

    Stop stalking these females
    Stop telling them they fine when they ugly as hell
    I get tired of dudes telling an ugly light skin chick she fine

    But when they see a fine chocolate Sister they say she look like nasty underwear hanging from a clothesline

    You weak men are a waste of life

    You boost up women’s heads
    And now they think they are everything you said

    Begging A Woman is Wrong

    And to you women who think I am supposed to chase you
    And be the fastest man to when your race
    Let me state something for your mental reflection

    MANASIAC DOES NOT RUN IN RACES or WHAT DUDE GONE BE MY MAN ELECTIONS.
    There will be no recounts or doubts
    The only chase you will get from me
    Is the speed of me tuning you OUT.

    I have been like this my whole life
    And this Moral code of mine is the reason why I WILL NEVER HAVE A WIFE

    This all started from my school days when I was young tyke
    And a I would try to play with a chick
    And she would turn around and say SIKE.
    Had me looking like a straight ******* chasing her round the playground

    I sat on the Merry Go Round with a frown
    Wit my head hung low
    And my spirits were down

    But a voice came to me in the form of my Auntie
    Do not chase or beg that girl
    And she set me free

    And now a got an off the chain non stalking policy

    I only will call you twice and leave two messages
    Because on the third call I feel like a stalker
    And I erase you out of my life
    Faster than yo grandma walk with her walker

    Bump Begging yall women
    Yall can back up off of me
    I do not need yall time, money, or cucchi
    I will give you a bullet before I beg
    And I aiming for yo head not yo leg

    And to you ugly chicks
    Yall must be sick
    The only thing an ugly broad can do for me
    Is be on her knees
    Because in my life and reality
    When you are on your knees ugly chick
    You are being all that you can be

    I prefer women who are straight forward of the top
    All that chasing behind a woman
    Must Stop

    It is more women in the world than me
    What make you think I am fend to chase after only you anyway
    When I see different ladies like everyday

    So this is the end of my moral code
    Which is written upon the tablets of my heart and soul
    And in my Mind Etched in stone
    I believed it from a child and even now when I am grown

    BEGGING A WOMAN IS WRONG

    Manasiac :uzi:
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok
    but who wants a brotha that is beggin and manasia I have too words for ya...My brotha...SEEK HELP :lol:
     
  3. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Poem is VICE VERSA a Woman should not have to beg a man for nothing either.

    And I IS seeking help but Samantha tripping LOL!

    Manasiac :uzi:
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well ok.
    I think you got what you had to say off your chest!!!!
    I aint mad at you though.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well ummm
    ok
    releasing i see
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK, then I see that you say it is vice-versa, now I'm alright with it. I guess some folks think that if they chase someone enough they will change their minds, but all that has really changed is the level of respect that has been lost.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thanks for dis flow it really open the minds
    indeed this only fine self in a mix of lost not gain
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my goodness
    you are indeed releasing
    in this poem
    hi flow on
    reading you for sure
    much love
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol

    Man...Manasiac, you went off didn't ya...had me rollin off underwear on the clothesline and the grandma's walker line...lol

    A nice drop from the one and only Manasic.... :shades:

    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    Brother ...you are sumthin else...

    but you do raise some very good points...

    and we all have our limits...

    yours was a lot to absorb...

    but if it keeps you focused...

    I aint hatin...Scribe On Brother... :wink:

    More of us should be so disciplined...
     
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