Black Poetry : ...BEFORE...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Jan 9, 2006.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    find somebody that loves you
    find somebody that wants you
    find somebody you love too
    find somebody you want to

    make you see things you've never seen before
    feel comfortable and make you feel so secure
    treat you like a lady or respect you was a man
    don't run away cuz then it'll be out of your grasp

    cuz i know
    ive been there
    before
    ive pleaded
    before
    ive been lost
    before

    ive been on both sides of ths story
    retold many times but the hurt ain't glory
    ive cried
    ive doubted
    ive stressed
    ive cussed
    i
    felt
    like
    i
    jus
    wasn't
    enough

    thought thats why he ain't want me
    and thats why its so scary
    for someone to give into the feelings
    of wanting and needin me

    it stalled me
    a lil bit
    scared me
    a lil bit
    jerked me
    a lil bit
    but now
    im takin' it

    find somebody to make you truly happy
    without being scared to give them a chance to
    treat you the right way or break your heart
    real trust is when your not scared to love

    i know
    i been there
    before
    i've gave up
    before
    ive been alone
    before

    oh oh i know

    i've been there
    before
    i've pleaded
    before
    i've lost it
    before

    but now i'm in love...
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seen you before
    Dreamed you before
    Texted you before
    Wanted to get next to you...

    Thoughts cross my mind
    The vision of you
    The vision so clear
    Please hold me near

    Before

    I saw your picture
    I was madly in love
    Now I see your picture
    I just think of the joy
    The smile on your face
    Is more than enough

    Before

    I saw your beautiful skin
    I knew it was skin deep
    Im knockin let me in
    Cold outside
    Can I please come in???

    Before

    I found out you were in love
    Thought of the moment of your voice
    The clarification of course
    Your lips so supple
    Make my lips so moist

    Before

    I went sleep last night
    Did you know I dreamed
    Dreamed of taking you out tonight
    From Birmingham to the Chi
    I was willing and then
    I thought to myself
    Would she be feeling this here??
    But wait!!

    Before

    You indulged my mind in this thread
    I took a risk with everything I just said
    Before
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true , so felt and very endearing
    i too been on this road singing this
    same song wondering if i belong
    did i do something wrong i feel ya
    and to love and be loved is the key
    to happiness ......stay blessed sis.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the wonderful comments:)
     
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    and before i do i hope he want throw me a tantrum either. just kidding tantrum i loves ya baby!!!!!!!! love the flow flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks nevar...
     
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    Nice piece...Flow on..
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks soblessed...
     
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    wow this was beautiful cause i could relate

    i must admit,sometimes i just get confused

    i thought i was in love,but now i cant stand the person,even tho they are the most realest ,genuine people ive ever met

    this piece kinda gave me new insight at the same time

    i dunno

    its makin me think,thats a good peice for ya

    metally stimulain,you go ma

    congrats

    i wanna be like you one day,in love,lol

     
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    Da mn ma, I want to be where you're at in life!!!!!



    I loved it girl :spinsstar:
     
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