Black Poetry : Before the credits roll

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  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm wishing on a star
    the last one in the sky,
    I've used up all the others
    just like my last cry
    I've held a torch for you
    now the fuel has gone dry
    a little prayer I'll say
    while I stare up high,
    and make my wish, cross my fingers
    and hope you didn't really die
    I should have told you how I felt
    I knew I should have smiled
    when you looked at me as you walked slowly by
    and now it seems my first words to you
    is a simple sad goodbye.
    before god pulls the curtains
    and roll the credits by
    I just want to say I love you
    and please don't you cry
    I'll meet you at the crossroads
    where we can finally share a smile
    in the meantime you be kool
    and tell my grandma I said hi
    may your wings make you soar higher than the night
    and when you're tired of heaven
    come back to earth and guide me with your light:heart:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so so so beautiful i felt this so deep within
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    This was so beautiful, just like your spirit, nothing this beautiful could come from someone without a beautiful soul...Lord child, you are truly a gift! Not expected, not to be rejected and always but always a joy!

    Blessings On Ya House!:angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1:
     
  4. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks rich and lucsious, I truly appreciate this. No one's ever told me i had a beautiful spirit, thats so sweet.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIFE

    Endearing work! Central to our very existence. Surreal, but real.

    DREAM WEAVER... the real deal.

    1poetsought

    :toast:
     
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