Black Poetry : Before I'm too Old

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by IfUComeSoftly, Dec 5, 2005.

  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Before I'm too old to enjoy it
    let me know your touch
    be held in your arms
    brush your thumb across my cheek
    look into my eyes and profess
    this attraction between us
    spread your fingers across
    the small of my back
    letme take you inside of me
    as my ocean of wetness
    warms you to the core
    i'll please if you please me
    the next time i see you
    let's stop this madness
    what are we waiting for
    i'm grown now it's time for you
    to grow firm inside of me
    the pulse of you is always
    always...welcome...
    you are always welcomed here
    in the folds of my my love
    this peach is yours
    ripe only for you
    let the juice trickle down your chin
    i want to taste me on you
    then treat me to your love
    i'm starved
    so before i'm too old to appreciate it
    overwhelm me
    i'm waiting
     
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    welcome to Destee sister. Great piece this is.
     
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    Excellent post Sis.......drive em' crazy girl:welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooweeeeee !
    indeed i can charm
    deep inside this .......great sweet release

    Welcome Back Home it's been a while.
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother $$RICH$$, this is actually her debut.....lol:haha:
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ibrahim… Spicy… Rich

    Thank you for showing me love. Destee is a beautiful thing

    Softly
     
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    Sultry and smoothly written, I enjoyed this piece. Welcome, or welcome back, which ever applies, lol, make yourself at home poet.
     
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    ur a beautiful one as well
    again welcome within the family
    as every beat is soundly heard
    continue on poetess.................
     
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    this was hot flow on poet.:spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    Dear,
    Ifucomesoftly

    If I sex you right
    Tell me what that do
    Stick my tongue out
    Ride it like you do
    Pony you gone ride
    I told you
    Ride it like you do
    This is how do it vehicular
    Flip your body perpendicular
    Give it to you on a regular
    Please dont be blowing up my celly gurl

    Nice Drop Poet
    Welcome to the Poetic Haven
    Much Love
     
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