Black Poetry : Beep, Beep, Beep

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unheard of, Nov 11, 2003.

  1. unheard of

    unheard of New Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 11, 2003
    Messages:
    3
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    I hear the alram sound as I walk through
    Beep, Beep, Beep...
    I toss my keys into a round silver bowl
    As the security guard stares down his pointed nose
    I walk through again relaxed and at ease
    But still the alarm sounds back LOUD and Harshly at me
    BEEP!!! Beep, Beep...
    Calmly I part with my jewelry
    Walk through once more, and silence is heard
    Security hands me my purse
    "Don't I get a thank you...Mike? Isn't that your name? Mic, Mic check, Mike you checked my purse my pockets, I even let you pat up and down my legs. Mike, as history tells the story to me, your ancestors brought terrorism to this country? Correct? Can I get a Mic check? Mike checked me, and that's cool, I'll do what I gotta do, but Mike is a pocket checking fool, he checks me...yes you Mike, but passes up the murderers with gray suites, matching ties, light brown to blonde hair with blues eyes, while metal detectors I repeat through....tell me Mike, Mic check, checking not 1, but 2, Mike...who checks you?
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    :wave:Welcome to Destee.com:wave:
    enjoy.. :wave:
    nice flow goin on as well...mic check dig dat..:angel1:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    again welcome within this was very nice flowin here
    let ya pen continue
     
  4. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2003
    Messages:
    6,008
    Likes Received:
    44
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Praising The Lord
    Location:
    Baltimore, MD
    Ratings:
    +44
    Hey Welcome :wave: to the family
    ah this is a nice flow
    would love to read more
    this is wonderful
    Peace
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    You won't be unheard of any longer bringin' it like you do. Don't know who checked Mike, but I'll be checking you out again, and again!
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,471
    word.....
    this was clever as hell
    and on point...daps
    please drop s'more...
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Singapore
    Joined:
    May 13, 2003
    Messages:
    6,477
    Likes Received:
    110
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Servant of the People
    Location:
    Bay Area, CA
    Ratings:
    +131
    I love that last line and hope its not your last line...:)
    :geek: so let it flow...:)
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    4,912
    Likes Received:
    613
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    (RF) Technician
    Location:
    ( Alonewolf ) California.. by way of the LOU
    Ratings:
    +795
    Very Nice flow. No one's checking Mike.

    Welcome to Destee