Black Poetry : Been Away Too Long

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  1. j2das05nc

    j2das05nc Member MEMBER

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    I been away a long time,
    Trying to be true,
    Never in a million years,
    I only thought of you;

    But everytime I come to see you,
    You never take my hand,
    You never bring me to you,
    And I dont understand;

    Have I hurt your feelings,
    Done something wrong,
    Or is it just your true love,
    Has been away to long;

    Seems to me,
    I been away too long,
    I must have left your mind,
    While I was gone;

    Love is who you are,
    Love is what I want,
    Love will never die,
    But love and me, dont.


    -J2daS05NC
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime what seem to be just not !!
    felt ya scribe here very well said & pose
    flow head on and again welcome to the family
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    likes ya scribe...
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it's not that we've done anything wrong, just not the right person....yet. Liked the flow, and welcome to destee!!
     
  5. j2das05nc

    j2das05nc Member MEMBER

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    true said.

    Thanks again for the welcome.


    -J2daS05NC
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    Welcome

    That's right, keep droppin these vibes...let us get to know you.
    Welcome Home
    ~Nita~
     
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