Black Poetry : been a minute....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Feb 9, 2013.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    words..
    they get old over rhyme
    like gold lose value over time
    but if you know what value is...
    it's measured by the weight of heart and mind
    and the eye that beholds...
    so unless it's God then it's already declined..,.

    been a minute since my last post
    but i was just
    sippn on coffee roast
    eatin cheese toast
    but don't worry i'm still the poet of hosts..
    but no need to boast..

    i'll be here for a few days
    seein what's good
    scopin the wheat
    and rippin the tare so
    wack poetz beware
    cuz after you audition
    i'm just gon' stare...like

    you still here??
     
  2. MahoganyUnique

    MahoganyUnique Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sound like a freestyle from the tone, nice flow though. Had me hearing an imaginery melody.
     
  3. Destee

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    lol Brother J'hiah ... of course i enjoyed the WHOLE PEACE ... but the words above made me laff out loud ... :rofl:

    too precious ... thanks for coming home ... your room and stuff are just like you left 'em ... :love:

    Much Much Love and Peace.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man you still off the hook happy to read you again ......sure been a long time we gotta hook up
    again soon
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother I see you still at it.
     
  6. Nahshon

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    enjoyed this free verse...keep it up poet, scribe, and griot
     
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