Black Poetry : bedroom worship

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NicoleM, Apr 25, 2004.

  1. NicoleM

    NicoleM Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We worshiped God together
    Worship: commonly called “making love”
    You can’t “make” LOVE
    So we responded to LOVE together
    We worshiped
    It was more than pleasure
    I gave it up full measure
    He gave it up double measure
    I’ve discovered it is not only we women
    Who have treasure
    He is man of preciousness
    Man greatly beloved
    There is no man before or above him
    We walked into a whole new comfort level
    It was like day and night
    From no eye contact
    To day light
    On top of the covers
    In front of the mirror
    Nothing on but a pair of black stilettos
    On my knees
    I got lost in the throes
    Of using my mouth
    and giving him deep throated praise
    I can’t really remember the details
    I lost myself
    So, it’s sort of a haze
    But I do know I walked funny for a couple of days

    (c) 2004 Nicole Mitchell
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's to ya slow walking...it seems that :love: conquers all :huh: ...nice piece, thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed u said it all here ......
    da funny walks and all
    flow on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wasn't sure where you were going with this, at first. This was pretty crafty. And I really wasn't expecting the ending, lol @ "walked funny for a couple of days".
     
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    this was tight
    very creative
    love this one
     
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