Black Poetry : Bedevilled

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEDEVILLED
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    Uh-ooh...
    Here comes trouble
    With a different drummer
    Playing like no other
    On a another level
    Bedevilled...
    Unoriginal doubles,
    Imperiled...
    Constitutional druthers
    A prophet bursting bubbles
    Just be looking for trouble,
    So blessed ~
    Passed the lyrical test
    Taking all comers-
    Of the establishment,
    Bedevilled...
    Flows from east to west
    Almost famous
    Entertaining guests,
    Disheveled...
    Giving all he's got
    Scribing down the truth
    Right around the clock,
    Forever...
    Every life he lives,
    Bedevilled...




    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are out of my league,
    your high as the floating leaves.
    the level your on,
    has far been gone.
    for i can never teach,
    something i will never reach.
    i loved this piece,
    i found it quite neat.
    if you look,
    past all the books.
    we have all settled,
    into the lifestyle of being bedevilled.....(great poem--really great!)
     
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    lilcherry76- It is always a treat to hear from you. This time, you move me deeply. Always,

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