Black Poetry : becomming a man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blacklove, Jul 22, 2003.

  1. blacklove

    blacklove Active Member MEMBER

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    what are the first steps to become a man
    take my hand as i take you to the father land
    becomming a man has responsibilties
    you go through so many trials and tribulatons just to get liberty

    once you made that step to become a father
    more responsibilites comes alot harder
    no more hagin out with the boys or chilling with the ladies
    you're becomming a man no more time to act shady

    yeah you can have fun every now and then
    but its time to settle down you have to give in
    no one said becomming a man would be easy
    be a real man, stop being slezzy

    becomming a man can be a big role
    but if you love being important you will take that strole
    becomming a man has alot of rules and regulations
    lets see if you are ready to set that impression.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG!!! I LOVE THIS.!!!! IM FEELIN THIS SSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO MUCH!!!!:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !!!
    be a man about it !
    tyte felt flow
     
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    Hey blacklove
    This is wonderful :grouphug:
    the steps of
    a man wanting
    to be the best there
    is as a Dad
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    Let all the "Real Men" stand.............Nice flow here!
     
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    This was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO beautiful. A rare work of art :)