Quiet Poetry Lounge : Becoming... Steady Evolving

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lowkey, Sep 20, 2004.

  1. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Travel deep inside the mind of a man on a search fo his own identity
    Coming out of his cacoon to fly free into the world
    Similar to a bird but more like a vicious Falcon
    Swooping down on opportunity
    Searching fo dat unity of the mind,body, and soul
    Taking control of his flight, destination and arrival
    I'm experiencing that mental revival...
    Rejuvination as I let go of the things that used to bother me in the past
    My mind grows and flows 24/8 370 degrees
    Thats more than normal u see...
    Because I'm a unique individual
    With a 1st name like none other I'm on a different page
    That creativeness flows thru my veins
    Deep inside my mind is where I'm coming from...
    Sailing smoothly on that sometimes rugged sea of life
    Travel deep inside the mind of a yung man coming into himself
    His visions, his dreams, his reality..
    Taking action on what he wants and control of his situation
    My pen is moving freely like thumbs on a Playstation...
    Or a XBOX..
    As u can see I'm feeling myself Like I'm trippin on an Ex-shock (extacy)
    Dayum, I'm free
    Dayum, I can feel
    These words written are ohhhh sooo real
    Once congealed in the back of my mind
    Now coming forth to the light
    I'm free...
    No longer a slave to conformity and childish ways
    But I still love my 4 X Tall T-Shirts
    But this is the rebirth of an old soul...
    Held back by inner doubts.. hopppin out that drought
    I'm free..
    Roll wit me or against.. take your pick but I will continue to progress
    Writing my life story wit my hand on the left.............side
    Ride........... in the mental Bently of a young man reawakened with wide eyes
    Be surprised as to the things you'll see me do and say
    Unpredictable I will be.. making u think..laugh.. n making dem ladies smile
    I have switched up my style.. no longer afraid of change n letting loose
    I'm a keep u on yo toes
    In the literal sense and through pros
    Dayum.. he's on a roll
    Like 6 fat girls at an all u can eat buffet
    Say HEY... to the beast once held hostage by his own mind..
    Feel the tectonic plates shift as he walks into the room..
    Dayum.. he got it
    And if u like my style come closer and feel my aura
    U just traveled inside the mind of a man who is....... BECOMING
    Steady evolving.





    -lowkey
     
  2. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    Steady evolving. flow on lyndon street poet...flow on......now thats a poem !!!!!!!! :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The smoothness of your flow was steadily evolving as well, as the reader could feel the growth of determination within your words. Flow on poet.
     
  4. lowkey

    lowkey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u watzinaname... i really appreciate it

    u give real love... much welcomed :) :)



    -lowkey
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    lowkey
    evolving...becoming..... I could feel it..
    flowed with it all the way..
    keep on..steadily
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free creativity of steady evolving deep scribe and word play
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaah....yeah
    this had that hotness of freeness...
    I paid my fair and jumped aboard
    your train...to take a look inside
    the mind of a man that is "evolving"...
    yet...always keeping it lowkey...
    as only he can...be
    a poet ~ tree
    ....allowing is leaves of introspection
    to fall on me...

    Flame on poet...
    Sage
     
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