Black Poetry : Become one.........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Apr 15, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The moment is there....
    we are alone....
    We lay eachother down...
    stroking eachother gently..
    with the tip of our fingers...
    they are the only expression..
    of words.
    We look in eachothers eyes..
    and communicating with our
    souls......
    We smile at eachother ...
    there is only light...
    Our breath is trembleling...
    because the oxygen
    is love....
    We are naked....
    shameless...
    as how it was ment..
    to be..
    and i,m looking at you....
    and youre looking at me....
    chicken spots are rising
    all over our body,s...
    you feel me ..
    and i,m feeling
    you..
    deep...
    We,re making love strong...
    nothing can come between us anymore
    cause we are married...
    bounded ....
    through ..
    God..
    As a mirror we synchronise..
    but also swich roles....
    There is nothing but energie ...
    flowting through our..
    hearts..

    As we lay there in our arms..
    as we lay there in our warmth..
    we softly cry tears of joy.....
    because ..
    he brought us
    Home.....

    The next day ...
    you come back from youre work..
    and we look into eachothers...
    eyes...
    Just by that look into eachothers eyes.....

    we experiance that moment we had...
    all and all over again....
    because ..
    we..
    became...
    One...
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It takes one, to know one- very nice!

    1poetsought ~
     
  3. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wonderful ... i want that for myself someday.

    I'll carry this piece with me Liberty - thank you.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribe i was into it
    thanks for sharing dis magic moment
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poetsought....thanks..(that thing you said was deep)
    hypnotize....thank you to..........
    i sigh....yes i hope i be blessed to experiance that to one day..
    for you .hypno...you will.. if you believe....(god) he will guide you to it
    Rich...thanks for reading...and feeling the magic of it....
    because i hoped that people feld the emotion of it....
    much love to ya beautifull people
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ........One !
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    this was wonderful
    every word..oh my
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AHhh yes gurl bring back the good old days
    of what liberty says
    :)
     
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