Black Poetry : BECAUSE YOUR EGO IS CAUSING ME PROBLEMS

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    When you first looked at me
    I thought I saw a glance familiar

    I must've known what love was once
    cause your look was love defined

    all new possibilities or as said
    passion without a form

    but i know a functioning ego
    I mean mine never likes to be wrong

    of course i appreciate the way you change your way
    and follow where i go

    but your ego is causing me problems
    debating with things i already know

    so ur a man and a man is head
    I think they meant man beleives with his "head"

    I mean define for me which head is gon make me
    agree with all you said

    the thirty second ecstacy
    the barely three made pumps

    your ego got you turning red
    cause it's defined as humped and dumped

    so as you continue at ur peter pumpkin eater play
    check ur ego, listen up and let's do things my way

    i'll moan and fake and feed ur ego and really make u shine
    but at the most just learn my body and stay away from my mind

    yours is lost with you having no desire to even find
    so be the boss, take it off

    cause i only came to get mine
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...feeling you here sis
     
  3. free2b_me

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    Ego Trippin

    :read:Yes Ma'am, I am feelin this.. It's a nice read...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    they don't know who they're dealing with

    don't sell yourself short in the "game"

    you deserve better
     
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    phynxofkemet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    missed you

    nice to hear from you once again... I once read that ego stands for easing god out, I like this piece
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was crazy cool...made me say, "hmmmmmm...."

    :spinstar: very creative write.
     
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    girl i know what you mean sometimes it gets like that. Nice
     
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    His ways and means are important, but no more important than yours. Your luster should only add to his, not dim his shine. Well posed piece, welcome back.
     
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    Miss Lady:
    Like the way you laid this piece.
    It reminded me of someone I use to know.
    So much for so call ego.


    Much Luv
     
  10. Rashad

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    nice post poet
    sometimes the ego
    gets in our way
    of tru hapyness!
    It's Nice when one
    can Check their ego
    at the door and leave it...
    Good stuff here poet
     
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