Black Poetry : because someone else chose to love me out loud

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when it comes down to it....
    it was never my fault,
    i told u how i felt....but u
    u left me in the dark
    thinkin that all it could ever be is a dream,
    because u were the one to hold it all in...
    it was ur fault that i was left guessin
    so now ur mad,
    because someone else chose to love me out loud,
    and i chose to love him back,
    because the love he gave i knew he wouldnt take back
    and now u come to reality,
    u claim that u do love me...
    now y now?
    is it because someone else chose to love me out loud????
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often when one is in silent thy love is in hush til another prove thy love
    out loud then one will speak there feelings ................up close and personal

    well felt ........so many hide it until it's too late .......yes it's because another
    choose to love u aloud
     
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    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u much rich ...much luv!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that was powerful, and can't be refuted. If you love someone let them know, not because someone else may beat you to the punch, it's because you truly do love them. This was right on point.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you know

    yea that's right poet

    don't be fool

    you're seeing the whole picture

    are they really sincere in their actions or lack there of

    peace
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some people...

    don't want or know what they got, til someone else got it... perhaps its the answer to why.

    Endless can be our questions when a relationship doesn't pan-out.




    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes! I was feeling this piece here....its all about show and tell....You gotta SHOW me you love me and TELL me often.....loved this!
     
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