Black Poetry : Because of you !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Because of you i found myself

    because of you i loved and blessed
    because of you i was put to this test
    and now i'm twisted in this mess

    Because of you my heart confess
    kissing your words no more stress
    made me feel da beat of ya chest
    as i lay upon ya soft breast

    I didn't know you could make me feel
    until we made love in secrecy of da mind
    see loving you was no crime
    yo reality was indeed da deal
    that our bodies twisted and seal

    Because of you i found my date
    mixing wisdom and mastering our fate
    soulfully we can be da perfect mate
    putting knowledge in words nothing fake
    see u give me these feelings and shakes

    With all da cares and tenderness of hope
    because of you i'm no longer a joke
    because together our spiritural glow enter float
    into a place of blue heavens and no smoke
    as we rock in da sea of love boat

    You now my rock and hard place
    a reminder of greater grace
    from da smile upon ya face
    when we meet in our enter lace
    not a drop of your love shell i waste

    I've taste'd the flava of ya erotic fruit
    loning for da day we knock da boots
    savoring our inner roots
    see i love u , my goodness shoots

    sharing something devine and unique
    giving all our treats of sweet
    because you are rare and so meek
    my love u know play for keeps
    because of you today i weep
    inside my slumbering sleep
    because of you i'm seducted deep
    and now i rest at your feet
    you are my queen to be
    so baby hello speak to me
    come let's make us a we:nuts:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much that is sweet in this piece. It has some playful lines, but mostly it reads as though it's from the heart. Touching write.
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Because of you ... I've been touched on this day. This is so sweet and hearftfelt. Keep doing what you do my brother.
     
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    it was one i had to release from my mind and heart thankz watz

    And because of you asimplepoet i've created da picture of painted brush...Thankz a million sis
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmm because of you my love........
     
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    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You tworked this one Sun!
     
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    thankz Nevar for da visit and because of u

    i try my best thankz Jazztude 4 da visit
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    calling 911 the fireman dept

    yes there's a poet on FIRE

    by the name of

    $$$$$$$$$$$$$$RICH$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

    lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man just trying to bond da glue of man and wo-man .....let's say match maker...lol
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ah yea

    but that's not glue you're bonding with

    lol:em2100::thinking::em3400: