Black Poetry : Because of You

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its not the depth of our love
    that keeps us strong
    its the possibility
    of what if

    what if we just lay here
    and just hold each other
    what if we just have a conversation
    and for once in our life
    just love with our words
    caressing each one of them
    like tomorrow doesn't exist

    we could spend our eternity laying in bed
    forget that we lay in our nakedness
    it would just be you and I
    and our thoughts
    that give us sexual healing

    No penetration need
    what I speak of is mental love
    the type of love
    that lets us keep believing
    of the possibility of what if

    see we forgot that in order
    to make love
    we got to give love

    what if we just laid in bed this evening
    candles surrounding us
    No TV nor radio
    and watch the sun go down
    and when the sun and the moon
    trade places

    I kiss you.... mentally
    and tell you I want to explore
    the best of you
    not just your naked body
    but also your
    beautiful deficiencies

    see I love you... for who you are
    and not what you are
    I love you for your perfect imperfections
    it is them that have me
    yearning for you.

    I wanna taste your delightful thoughts
    Letting them penetrate my intellect
    Influencing me with gestures
    Of warm embraces
    But to be honest
    I just want to hold your everything
    Kissing your forever’s
    Until infinity

    I want to stroke your ego
    Like I’m making love to you
    Pleasing your fantasies
    Like they do in romance novels
    Touching you but not physically
    Letting you know
    That no matter what
    You are my everything

    When I say good-bye
    I miss you
    When I close my eyes
    I want to dream of nothing more
    Then you
    It is you that has me fining
    Like a crack head
    But not because of sex

    To put it simply
    It is you that has me breathing
    And with each breath
    I take
    I breathe you into my existence
    Because you are everything
    I ever need, wanted, and envisioned
    In a woman

    It is because of you…..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know this so well and can relate in the depth of this
    Just because !

    This one is in my mind love the piece
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Absolutely beautiful:wine: :kiss:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much make sure to read the rest of my poems too or go to www.myspace.com/defiantson to hear some vocal tracks.

    Mannie

    And Rich thanks fam for always supporting me.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    boy dont get me started. i will get all freaky up in this piece. just kidding love. but i will byte back now. so look out here i cum! just kidding!:welldone:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is not even about sex so yeah its beautiful
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it may not be about sex but its the way im percieving love. so be easy on me love. i got your message but your title is just open to me. So be cool daddy i got cha!​
    :flowers:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no doubt do what you do ma... you know I appriciate it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, the depth of your love for her is so intense, wow... What a beautiful piece!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you now if I ever meet her is a different story