Black Poetry : Because Of You

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Because of You

    Baby, its not the depth of our love
    that keeps us strong
    its the possibility
    of what if

    what if we just lay here
    and just hold each other
    what if we just have a conversation
    and for once in our life
    just love with our words
    caressing each one of them
    like tomorrow doesn't exist

    we could spend out time laying in bed
    forget that we lay in our nakedness
    it would just be you and I
    and our thoughts
    that give us sexual healing

    No penetration is need
    what I speak of is a mental love
    the type of love
    that lets us keep believing of what if
    see we forgot that in order
    to make love
    we got to give love

    what if we just laid in bed this evening
    and watch the sun go down
    and at that exact time
    when the sun and the moon
    trade places

    I kiss you.... mentally
    and tell you I want to explore
    the best of you
    not just your naked body
    but also your
    beautiful deficiencies

    see I love you... for who you are
    and not what you are
    I love you for your perfect imperfections
    it is them that have me
    yearning for you.
    Because baby, they are you!!!!!​


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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW.. that was truly nice... "what if... huh" you flowed like you always do.. thanks!!!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love. Is that you on the pic? Wow.... hmmmm... I feel a poem comming on. LOL....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa u laid this one out to a what if thang awesome write
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich you always have something good to say.

    Mannie
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for showing me some love on my write you know what it is. and also i love how you put it down papi. you know i got you always.:welldone:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks you very much Nevar... Lol... hey whats that spell backwards????? lol
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what my name or what you lost me!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was a joke ma... relax lol...
     
  10. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep that's it man!
    "Beautiful Deficiencies & Perfert Imperfections." gotta to give it to ya like Whoa! cause these were some hot oxymorons. Keep up that tight flow!