Black Poetry : Because Day

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  1. SupaUgly

    SupaUgly Member MEMBER

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    Because Day

    Expressing my love and devotion shouldn’t have to come only on holidays

    My feelings seem to increase as the days accumulate

    I want to show my appreciation for you more then on Christmas, Valentines

    And on birthday’s

    So today I declare a New Holiday that we will always share together

    This is a holiday that we celebrate everyday whenever and wherever

    I call this Because Day

    Because you deserve to be treated like a queen

    Because only God knows how much you mean to me

    Because you saw something in me I didn’t see in myself

    And for this I’m a better man

    Because of your help

    Because you taught me the true meaning of love


    And I am forever in your debt

    As we celebrate are first night of Because Day

    I will make it a night you will never forget

    So to all the men who do special things

    For there ladies to attest their love

    Do something unexpected

    And when she ask the occasion

    Tell her you did it Just Because
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, now poet this was sweeter than sweet. Your lady is blessed to have ya. This touched me brotha.
     
  3. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a jones huh, I know of what you speak of except my jones left my bones.
     
  4. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow i liek the concept and its well written as usual(all your stuff is) I liked it alot.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a sweet poem. romantic, honest
    I liked it very much.

    moham
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    swet smooth and full of love just because
    what a day to cherish