Black Poetry : Became You

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  1. annointed84

    annointed84 Member MEMBER

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    Became You
    A. Welch

    During a night of passion
    When the heat of the moment surrounded us both like angry mobs,
    I came into you.

    I lingered inside your temple,
    Though already defouled by the inconsiderate proposals of many before me.
    I began to explore your inner being.

    In the midst of surreal screams of a name you only briefly knew,
    I sneaked into your private world.
    There I made my home.

    You, the smartest of all your homegirls
    continued your life unknowingly sharing me with others.
    Besides "I've never felt like that's" and "I think I saw heaven's",
    I never again crossed the web of the complicated fabrications of your mind.

    If, for one solitary moment, between the pleasant pecks and romantic rubs
    you had stopped to think,
    You would not be so familiar with me now.

    But instead, you allowed the
    vibrations, sensations, and demonstrations of what you called "love",
    to cloud your natural inhibitions.

    Durning a night of passion
    When the heat of the moment surrounded us both like angry mobs,
    HIV became You.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within

    dis was tyght flowin'
    as i welcome u within
    upon family & friendz
    welcome to DESTEE's poetic playground
    flow on !:) :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    POINTED AND ANNOINTED

    DON'T TRY THIS AT HOME... nicely done, annointed one!

    WELCOME :wave:

    1poetsought ~
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had a friend once at summa camp she was always depressed and sad. Then she met this boi that told her all these lies and told her she waz beautiful, and eventually he got her to do tha nasty wit him, Well a couple of days lata he gave her a box and said don't open it until you get home, so when she got home she opened it. And it waz a necklace wit a coffin on it and it said welcome to the world of A.I.D.'s

    WRAP IT UP, it means life or death,
    one night of love ain't worth all yo health.

    Nice poem loved it!!!

    peace and blessins----------------serenti poet
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    serenti-poet...such a sad story that happens everyday. sad for your friend.

    annointed...WELCOME to the playground...you bring gifts of life's endeavors. eye opening. THANKS for sharing such a thought provoking piece.

    let the river flow.
     
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