Black Poetry : Beauty

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Mar 29, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I looked out my window to see
    The beautiful sky so free.
    The darkness of the air
    The brighness of the stars so fair.
    I went outside in search to find
    the true thoughts of my mind.
    The wind blew around me
    and I bent down on my knees.
    The stars twinkled in my eyes
    I thought about all of the lies.
    Why isn't the world like this
    the beauty everyone is so blind to miss.
    Don't let your life pass you by
    Just step aside to look and sigh.
    One day all of this beauty will disapear
    And everything will begin that we fear.
    So take a look
    Don't let work be your crook.
    Look and listen to the world out there
    And find a place to sit cause beauty is rare.
    One_Love
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    and beautiful this flow is

    go 'head gurlie

    flow like you know!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELCOME IN WITH A BEAUTIFUL FLOW
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beauty is this piece, very nice..
     
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    One,

    Nice!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    Heeeeeyy!

    i loved it :heart:

    ~keep flowin
     
  7. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...
    nice work!
     
  8. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    DESTEE
    Thanks for showing me the door and allowing me to be a part of this.

    Rich
    Hey there, been awhile :)

    Nita
    Thanks for the read

    GQ
    I missed your reply's! :)
    Thanks for the reply.

    Poeticdelight
    I knew I'd find you here. Your heart is in the right place!

    StarGoddess
    Thanks for the read girl!
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beauty is rare indeed...to have it eloquently scribed is rare too..keep scribin'! tight!

    one love, blak
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakverb

    Ahhh your to sweet Blakverb. Thanks.
    One_Love
     
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