Black Poetry : Beauty Personified

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :luvv: She is
    Beauty personified
    All of my vision when I think about her now she got me
    Reminiscing
    On
    Her style
    Her ways
    Her words
    She says
    I am the one
    And I believe it
    No matter what
    I receive my blessing she is
    Oh she is
    Beauty personified
    In the eyes of a devious world
    My girl stands out above the rest
    I confess she is the best
    I mean the best at what she do
    And when she do
    You know I do too
    She is
    She is
    She is
    The reason I breathe if breathe
    Was life then she is my life
    Infinity indefinite
    That’s what we’ll be
    My girl and me
    The family
    Is unacceptable but accept us all
    I found me
    In she
    And she is
    Beauty personified
    With all my vision
    When I think about her now she got me reminiscing
    On and on and on and on
    And till my record stops
    To catch the beat and
    My feet have calmed
    Cuz we danced all night
    And despite that
    The fact is she is
    My soul mate
    Full plate of collard greens
    And fried chicken
    Sunday dinner
    That has belly wishing
    Sundays were always
    Like this
    Like this
    Like this
    Moment
    This second
    This hour
    You shower me with loving
    With receiving
    With intriguing
    My psyche
    You see I am
    Beauty personified
    In all of her vision
    every time she thinks of me I got her reminiscing
    On my words
    My truth
    Like a sleuth it moved
    Her
    Wooed her
    And I didn’t lose her
    She is…
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is a beautiful poem...
    one should never take finding the right one for granted...
    and one shant with pieces like this...
    tyte joint...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice
    enjoyed it
    ........Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin this here very nicely done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful piece, sweetly laid.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    it's nice to feel and be in love..
    and to share that love creatively...
    a blessing..
    very nice...
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she is.... mmm...mmm..mmm... she is somin aint she
    loved this one
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm is right, one should never :nono: take another for granted...
    not being the case with you and your "Other half" for I surely see :love: with the two of you :wink:
    this was a beautiful piece...keep the :love: forever burning.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is nothing like finding thatr special somone who turns your whole world around! :spin:
     
  10. angelicsage

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    this was beautiful...
    it's always better when
    the feeling is mutual...

    Wonderful peace!
     
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