Black Poetry : Beauty Personified(4 da luvrs n u)

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  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She is
    Beauty personified
    All of my vision when I think about her now she got me
    Reminiscing
    On
    Her style
    Her ways
    Her words
    She says
    I am the one
    And I believe it
    No matter what
    I receive my blessing she is
    Oh she is
    Beauty personified
    In the eyes of a devious world
    My girl stands out above the rest
    I confess she is the best
    I mean the best at what she do
    And when she do
    You know I do too
    She is
    She is
    She is
    The reason I breathe if breathe
    Was life then life is she is my life
    Infinity indefinite
    That’s what we’ll be
    My girl and me
    The family
    Is unacceptable but accept us all
    I found me
    In she
    And she is
    Beauty personified
    With all my vision
    When I think about her now she got me reminiscing
    On and on and on and on
    And till my record stops
    To catch the beat and
    My feet have calmed
    Cuz we danced all night
    And despite that
    The fact is she is
    My soul mate
    Full plate of collard greens
    And fried chicken
    Sunday dinner
    That has belly wishing
    Sundays were always
    Like this
    Like this
    Like this
    Moment
    This second
    This hour
    You shower me with loving
    With receiving
    With intriguing
    My psyche
    You see I am
    Beauty personified
    In all of her vision
    every time she thinks of me I got her reminiscing
    On my words
    My truth
    Like a sleuth it moved
    Her
    Wooed her
    And I didn’t lose her
    She is…

    :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow......dis was awesome love the depth of it and how u laid it out .
     
  3. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Rich for da luv!!!!!!You keep me wanting to keep it coming!!!!!!!Nfinite Blessings*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed most welcome ......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i took care of the second post for you .......
     
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    To have someone that fits this description, is a lucky person for sure. This was lovely.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    this was a lovely declaration
    i love the echoing sound "she is, she is, she is" and "like this, like this, like this"...music...whisperings...very nice...
     
  8. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for all da luv family!!!!!!! Well appreciated!!! Rich my luv thanx so much it seems as if you looking out for me!
     
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    This is
    This is
    beautifully well written
    your words got me all stricken
    because they are beauty personfied
    as I hang on every word in this scribe
    words can't describe
    the way I feel about this
    I can see
    I can sense
    the love as it echos
    through out this beautifully
    well written poem.

    Much Love. Peace :love: :spin: ;)


    "I can do all things through Christ, which strenghtens me" Philip 4:13
     
  10. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poetic_diva you blessed me to no end! The point and purpose of my life is to be and show me, my ups and my downs. I am blessed to see that you felt my on the level I felt about my sweetie when i wrote this... just between you and me I cried when I wrote this no joke. Love is a powerful being and for once I found it! HOOOORAYYYY!
     
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