Black Poetry : Beauty Of A Woman

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    something about a woman drives me to insanity
    i got to tell ya like it is, hope none of yall get mad at me
    but women have always had the power ever since adam met eve
    so let me break down the importance to a women's anatomy

    first, i have to say its a women's backside
    it can even make the strongest person backslide
    i even have love for my women on the flatside
    but i LOVE my women on the fatside
    and if ur lackin on the behind...

    oooh how i love a women's chest
    god made nothin more beautiful than a women's breast
    the beauty reminds me of black sandy beaches
    or better yet, all of Picaso's art pieces
    i always ask god whats a women's recipe
    because every size always seems to get the best of me
    even though a woman's breast is pure delicacy
    a women's thighs are no less ya see...

    i like em thick, but i dont mind if theyre tone
    just as long as it got a tight grip when im down n free to roam
    silky smooth, the best place to grab cuz it got the most meat on the bone
    the beauty in that lies in the sight itself
    u can say thighs are not hypnotic, but you'd be lying to urself
    even though a woman's thighs hypnotize me
    there's nothin worse than what a woman's eyes do to me...

    a woman's eyes can be a sex weapon
    all she got to do is bat her eyes once n automatically u see heaven
    a woman's eye can say a lot without even movin her body or flexin
    long eye lashes and light brown always got me stressin
    but it dont matter to me as long as u know how to get my attention
    but even though a woman can captivate me with one blink of the optics
    aint nothin more powerful than the way a women uses her lips...

    big, small, medium- i love them in all sizes and shapes
    if she lick em or smack em - i still get dazed
    lip gloss, lip stick, chap stick - all add up to the addictive taste
    a woman knows how to time the lick of her lips to make a person crave
    she even knows how to pout n get mad to make a person behave
    but even tho a woman's lips, thighs, a booty, and eyes can be a deadly set
    aint nothin more powerful than a woman's intellect...

    word after word, clever, get caught-never
    book smarts, street smarts, common sense
    and when she can hold a mature convo is when it really gets intense
    a woman's mentality defines knowledge itself
    id rather take a women's advice than a book off a shelf
    but even tho a woman's brain can add up to be best
    i dont think it would be the same if u didnt add up all of the rest

    something about a woman drives me to insanity
    i hope i didnt offend yall, please dont get mad at me
    but women have always had the power ever since adam met eve
    i just had to explain the weakness i get when i see a women's anatomy
    cuz there's pure beauty in a woman...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No offense taken...this was a great description! On behalf of women who accept compliments well, this was a smooth piece...poeticlyspeakin!
     
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    Hi,

    I am not offended!! This is a great flow!!

    We do have that wicked power, don't we!! :lol:

    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!! u flowed dis to da max
    nice scribe keep speaking
     
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    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    Man I love this, great flow an ya didn't miss a thang. keep it coming :heart: :)
     
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    thanks yall, its madd crazy cuz i thought of this whole poem while gettin dressed lookin in the mirror. lol.
     
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    my goodness poeticlyspeakin this is sooooooooo nice ... wonderful...flow on
    Peace
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u bluewater
     
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    While you were in the mirror?????????????????? Dam...this is good :toast: to you and the power of that mirror!!!!!
     
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    lol thanx ma.
     
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