Quiet Poetry Lounge : Beauty Beaming

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely
    beaming
    glowing
    hair flowing
    round belly
    yes, I did that
    more beautiful than ever
    listening to
    fluid-fill laughter
    feet pressing at me
    as I nosily listen
    what's she doing
    sounds like she's swimming
    9 months from now
    I'll be able to ask her
    she won't respond
    she'll be a new-born
    but her and her mother
    are already one
    most beautiful thing
    she can go through
    makes me love her even more
    constantly kissing her stomach
    she acts as if I'm crazy
    only about her
    and the fact that we
    did this out of love
    we both had the feeling she was
    never seen her smile so much
    never seen her eat so much
    she's still sexy to me
    adding to the family tree
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in da motion of love
    very sweet piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful, seeing the beauty in a woman with child, flow on.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I couldn't believe it when i read this poem...all i can say is, "what a man!" this was just soo soo beautiful and i could tell it was straight from your heart. much much love to you!
     
  5. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all. Peace to all of you. Thanks for giving me so much good stuff to read.
     
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    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... :luv:
    Love
    the way
    you scribe
    Just beautiful...

    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  7. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much...and Happy Birthday Akilah.
     
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    this was sooooooooo beautiful....
    it nearly brought tears...
    Enjoyed it immensly!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was beautiful
    what love
    emotions wow
    glad i found it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the ultimate love poem, Kente. Really, really precious.
     
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