Black Poetry : **))'Beautifully Human'((**

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'Beautifully Human'
    Birthed: 24/03/05
    Scribed: PropheticNsyght 'Vuduu Chylde' (G.S.B, Gentleman Sings the Blues)




    Beautifully Human,
    form etched in gold...
    refined seven times seven in flames.
    cleansed and purified daily...
    A masterpiece in progress.
    My soul,
    wrought from HIS
    His breath flows through me...
    His thoughts move in me...
    His love consumes me...
    Perfect?
    Nah,
    just basking and living in
    perfect peace.
    Resigned to the idea that in this
    life, I will sometimes fall.
    Comfortable with my shortcommings and weaknesses.
    Wise enought to realize that I am strong and
    will not stay down long.
    He infuses me...
    My definition is found in him...
    he is my identity.
    Beautifully Human,
    the birth of knowledge enough to
    know that despite all the sun...
    sometimes there is rain.
    For every dry, desert-like landscape,
    there is a hidden oasis.
    Beautifully Human.
    Knowledge that there is good and evil,
    tears and joy,
    pain and pleasure
    and each comes in a specific, ordained measure.
    Beautifully Human,
    means I'm free to exist as I want.
    I'm at liberty to breath and soak in individuality...
    I am He and He is Me.
    Free to create,
    Free to destroy.
    Free to be straightforward or
    free to toy.
    Freedom...freedom...and more freedom.
    My thoughts, ideas, impressions, passions and reactions
    are my own.
    Beautifully Human to the bone.
    From the dust of the earth,
    to the clouds of the sky...
    God's peculiar and wonderfully made creation,
    there is no price and you can't buy.
    Each part of my form and spirit,
    carefully labored over before the beginning of time...
    I'm Beautifully Human;
    living, breathing and doing things to my
    own distinct rhythm and rhyme.


    'Gentleman Sings the Blues' Inc. 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was humanly tyte with sweet taste
     
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    :welldone: nice work enjoyed this read thanks for sharing...Angel
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW This was creatively done

    I am surprised that this wasn't upped more. this poem was so assured, giving off a love, and a poetic sense too humanity...

    I must say i am thoroughly impressed...but then, your work is always breathtaking. (let me stop gassin you up, lol)

    nah on the real, the poem was madd niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:cool:
     
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    Wow...the words encompass so much...The main feeling I got from this piece was that within our imperfections, lies beauty, no matter how small, to behold. I was into this vibe.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much bruh rich! You are truly beautiful.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much love. I'm so blessed to know you and have you speak such life to and in me.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you mami for your love.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I find this point of view exhilarating!
     
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    Overwhelming flow. Very Nice.

    You do see the creation of all things. Knowing that everything created came with no price. We were asked to take of it and to just be nice. Things do not have to be as complicated as they are. It is nice to know someone has found their distinct rhythm and rhyme.

    The pace of things rob man /woman of this. I'm speaking of what you still have a world of bliss.